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*Long time no read. :) Well we hope you like this next installment and concept Carmen has gotten herself into. Heads up, half way through this the perspective will change from Carmen to a narrator perspective. The formatting on the original Carmen site is on some BS so that's why I posted over here. Welp hope you enjoy.*
*Long time no read. :) Well we hope you like this next installment and concept Carmen has gotten herself into. Heads up, half way through this the perspective will change from Carmen to a narrator perspective. The formatting on the original Carmen site is on some BS so that's why I posted over here. Welp hope you enjoy.*
I am loving it out here in Trinidad. Three days in
and I don't want to ever go back to the states. My family has had me
laughing non stop since I got here. My aunts Tranice, Catarina, and
Teresa, who I always love talking with, were telling me old stories
about my mom at the moment.
"Tranice do you remember that summer that Carol
found out about the potion?" They all started laughing and my mother
began to blush.
"What's the potion?" I asked.
"No Catarina, do not tell her about that."
My mom protested.
"Oh Carol, don't be so uptight. Besides she's
a grown woman, she can know." my aunt said winking at me.
"Fine Onika go ahead and listen if you want
to hear about your parent's sex life."
"Mommy we both know it takes a lot for me to
get uncomfortable. Go ahead aunt Catarina." I sat Indian style
on the porch like a child readying for story time.
"Well it was the summer your mother decided
to give into Robert and lose her virginity. I say she was around 18.
She lost it at the beginning of the summer and by the middle of summer
let's just say she was experienced." They all snickered and my
mom was grinning from ear to ear. "Well we went to a college party
one night and were hanging out with some upperclassmen girls. Valetta
Drimwol was telling of how she found her grandmothers recipe for how
to keep your husbands manhood hard for four ours. She was giving out
the recipe and Carol decided she would try it out on Robert."
My jaw dropped.
"Pick up your jaw, I told you not to ask about
the story." My mom said and slid her sunglasses on.
"Carol called us the next day telling of how
her cuka, as you call it Nika, was so sore from all the sex they had
the night before. She vowed never to make it again. Of course we couldn't
stop laughing at her. We all had experienced the power of the potion
but decided to let our baby sister take a whirl at it."
"Just horrible sisters I have."
"Aww Carol what kind of siblings would we be
if we just kept you from experiencing the world." aunt Teresa said
cackling.
"Sure the one time you decide to mind your business."
"Well what's in it auntie Tranice?"
"Nika you don't want to do that to yourself.
Take it from me it's not worth it." My mom got up and walked inside.
They didn't know that they had just awaken Carmen
with that potion story. She wanted to experience four hours of hard
dick.
****
Everyone began leaving to go home for the night.
Before my aunt Catarina left I stopped her and begged her to tell me
where I could go pick up the potion.
"It's not something you can go pick up at a
store Nika."
"Well tell me the name of the old woman who
makes the potion and I'll go by a bottle."
"Nicki it's not some voodoo potion, it's more
of a punch really. Kids these days call it Love Punch 69. This is what
you need to make it."
"Hold on let me get a pen." I raced off
to the living room and grabbed the notebook the men had been keeping
score of the Domino game with and ran back. "Okay go."
"You need one package blueberry flavored unsweetened
drink mix, sugar, one bottle white cranberry juice, slice some oranges
and lemons and the most important thing it you need to go to the north
shore and climb the rocks and retrieve a three leaves of the Trinidice
bush."
"I've never heard of that bush before."
"It's only grows here in Trinidad. Make sure
you put on a glove when you go to pick it. The smell will stay on your
fingers for weeks if you make contact with it. It's not a bad smell
it's just not something you want to smell for to often. Now I gotta
go. Be careful with that punch Onika and do not tell your mom that I
gave you that recipe either. She'll kill me."
I won't auntie. Be safe getting home and thank you
for this."
Carmen was ready to make that night but Nicki wasn't
going to the north shore at this time of night by herself. Nicki went
the next day then waited until her and Safaree had a free day away from
the family.
****
The day had finally come to where Nicki had a whole
day free and made the punch. She had it all mixed up and in the fridge
waiting for Safaree. He was outside playing basketball with some local
men on a make shift basketball court. She wished he would hurry up.
As if he read her thoughts Safaree came walking through
the patio door. He kicked off his shoes and ran to the bathroom. She
took the pitcher out and poured him a glass. She heard the toilet flush
and at the same time the phone rang so she ran to the front hall to
get it.
Safaree walked back into the kitchen and seen the
blue punch in the glass. He figured it was Nicki's so he poured him
a glass and downed it. He washed the glass out and put it back in the
cabinet. Safaree went and sat on the couch. Nicki came back in the kitchen
and grabbed the glass and took it to Safaree.
"Here baby try this." he took the cup.
"Oh I just drank a glass but I'll take another,
it was really good." He began drinking the glass as Nicki's eyes
widened.
"Wait you already had a glass?" she watched
him finish off the punch.
"Yeah, when you were on the phone I poured me
a glass."
"Oh shit."
"What? Is something wrong babe?"
"No. I'll be back."
Nicki hopped up and ran to call her aunt Catarina.
On the third ring she picked up and Nicki began rambling off what happened.
"You said he drank two 8oz glasses?" her
aunt asked
"What's gonna happen? Is he going
to be alright?" Nicki asked panicked.
"Yeah he'll be fine but will you?
He's bout to take you on the ride of your life." Her aunt began
laughing then hung up the phone.
Nicki sat thinking. I'll be fine. This is Carmen
we're talking about, she can handle a little dick. Then again this is
Safaree's dick. She went to go see if he was okay.
Nicki peeped her head around the corner and saw him
sitting on the couch watching television. He looked back at her.
"What are you staring at baby? Come sit with
me." She walked over and sat next to him. She kept staring at him.
"What's wrong with you? Are you okay?" He felt her head.
"I'm fine." She looked down at his package.
"Are you okay?" She looked back at his face.
"Yeah I'm fine." He laughed. "You're
a weirdo." He held her close as they watched Law and Order SVU.
Nicki woke up and hour later to no Safaree. She decided
to get up and go take her shower. When she walked passed one of the
bedrooms she heard the shower going. She went and hopped in the master
bathrooms shower. The bathroom was huge compared to hers back in the
states. It had white tiled floors, it had an infinity tub with a flat
screen that came up in front of it. There was a rain shower that both
of them absolutely loved, a cherry wood park bench with cushions built
into it. She didn't understand why Safaree didn't wait for her. Little
did she know they would be enjoying it later on.
Once Nicki was done with her shower she went into
the room and started putting on her underwear. She put on a red lace
set she knew Safaree would love. Nicki heard the shower still going
and went to go check on him. When she walked into the bedroom she saw
his clothes leading to the bathroom. Walking in she braced herself for
a gust of steam but to her surprise it was quiet cool. She saw Safaree
standing in a cold shower with a full erection just staring at it. She
began to snicker and he looked up.
"Babe I don't know what to do, it won't go away.
I've nutted twice and it won't go away." he looked baffled.
Carmen felt so bad but she knew she could take care
of him for as long as he needed her.
"Come here baby let Carmen take care of that."
She opened the shower door and took his hand. He leaned over and shut
off the shower.
Letting Carmen take over her body she got ready for
the next four hours. Getting on her knees she placed her warm tongue
against his dick. She looked up to see his eyes meeting hers. Carmen
took half of his fully erect member into her mouth. She loved pleasing
him, it got her off in a way. Pulling it out her mouth she spit on it
and stroked it for him to catch her breath but soon it was back in her
mouth.
Safaree gripped her hair and spread his legs farther
apart to steady himself more. He was enjoying the attention he was receiving
from Carmen. Safaree loved it when she showed up, he knew if anyone
could get rid of this problem she could. His dick tickling the back
of her throat was exciting him more than ever. Safaree began to pump
his dick in and out of her mouth. Carmen braced herself on his muscular
thighs, she was glad she really practiced breathing from her nose during
their love making sessions. Safaree was not letting up with his thrusts,
if anything he was speeding up. Moments she felt a warm liquid hit the
back of her throat, she had no choice but to swallow.
"Damn man, why the hell won't this go away?"
Safaree sat back on the bed staring down at his dick. "My shit
is on brick."
Carmen paid no attention to his whining. Stepping
out of her underwear she grabbed his hand and led him to the balcony.
Gripping the balcony she arched her back until he could see her sweet
spot clearly. No words needed. Safaree entered her hot wet pussy without
a second thought. He was giving Carmen all of him and she loved it.
She could never get him to be this rough usually. Carmen opened her
eyes and saw the waves crashing against the shore and people walking
along the beach. The thought of getting caught sent her into her first
orgasm.
"Damn you came on daddy dick already? You wanna
cum again?"
Carmen nodded her head.
"Say it, say "I wanna cum on daddy dick"."
He was still stoking inside of her.
"I wanna cum...mmm. I wanna cum again."
"No." he slapped her ass. "on daddy's
dick." he grabbed both her arms supporting her weight and thrusted
in and out.
"Oh my...I wanna cum on daddys dick." she
squealed out.
"Yeah that's it. You feel so good."
"It's gonna-" it was too late she had cum
again. He legs went weak so Safaree had to grip her tighter. He was
nowhere near close to cumming, he just kept going. Opening her eyes
she was met with another pair staring back. It was an older black man
sitting at a table on the board walk. He tipped his straw hat to her.
She smiled. "Let's go back inside, it seems as if our audience
was satisfied with act one."
"Who?" Nicki pointed over to the house.
The man raised his glass to Safaree. Unlike Carmen Safaree was not about
that daredevil life. He liked to keep this part of his life private.
He yanked her inside as she giggled. "How long did you know he
was watching us Nicki?"
"Who's Nicki baby?" Carmen pushed him onto
the bed and straddled him. She looked at his face and knew he was a
little angry. "If you're gonna be mad take your anger out on this."
She slipped his dick back inside her and began riding like a champ.
Safaree flipped her over on her back and did just that. He showed no
mercy on her. Carmen's knees at one point were on both sides of her
head.
Hour Six
Carmen had convinced Safaree to take a food break.
She didn't have the heart to put an end to this fuck session. It was
her fault he was in this state. Carmens freaky ass just had to step
it up a notch. Standing at the counter eating some left over curry chicken
she heard Safaree coming down the steps. She hoped he had put on some
clothes and his erection had gone down. That was wishful thinking. He
came around the corner still erect as ever.
"Baby fix this." he stood behind her and
let his manhood fall right on her ass crack.
"I've been trying boo." She pouted putting
the last piece of chicken in her mouth.
As soon as she got done chewing Safaree had Carmen
bent over the counter readying her for orgasm 14. Carmen promised herself
when this was over she was tearing up that recipe. She didn't want to
ever make it again.
****
Hiding out in the shower Nicki leaned against the
wall to support herself. Carmen was kicking herself mentally for putting
herself through this. She heard the shower door open.
"Safaree please no more. I can't stand up."
"That's fine I'll support you." He picked
her up and pinned her between the wall and him. He was grinding his
hips slowly. Biting her lip she enjoyed the slow pace he was giving
her. "I love you."
Carmen got a sudden burst of energy and grinded back
instead of just letting him do all the work. Safaree was hitting her
g-spot and it was driving her crazy.
"I'm gonna cum baby."
"Do it for me daddy." She sucked on his
earlobe. Safaree gripped her hips tight and came inside her. This time
his erection went down. Both of them gave a sigh of relief.
After their shower they laid in the bed cuddled up
and drained. Eight full hours of non stop sex is not what either of
them had planned for the day. Four for Carmen but then she wanted to
leave and let Nicki take back over. Carmen felt like a champ though.
She didn't quit and completed her task, satisfying Safaree.
"Thank you for helping me out today." Safaree
said in her ear.
"No problem Safaree." She kissed him and
nuzzled in his chest for a well deserved slumber.
****
"No Candi that shit was hell on Earth after
four hours. Man stop laughing, my pussy is probably ruined and you think
it's funny." Nicki sat on her bed filling Candi in on all the juicy
details from the previous night.
"I'm sorry but that is funny. Your ass should
have known better than to be messing with stuff like that." Candi
busted out laughing again.
"Whatever bitch, I still got the job done. I
never tapped out." She got up slipping on her sneakers. "I
need to go pour the rest of that shit out."
"Naw bring that shit home, me and my dude can
try it out."
"No Can I'm telling you, you don't want to be
about that life." Just then Safaree called out to her.
"Aye Nicki do you want the rest of this punch
or can I go ahead and drink the last little bit."
"NO!" Nicki dropped the phone racing down
the steps.
*Thanks for reading. -MunStadShoNika ;)*